PIECE OF WRITING : Macbeth In Class Essay
Based on the feedback that I received for this writing piece, I did particularly well with analyzing my direct quotes. This was what I have been consistently told to improve in my past writing pieces not only this year, but throughout most of high school. The area that I need to improve on based on feedback, is the clarity of my topic sentences. The loop cycle did work for me because I was able to make a clear thesis statement and support it well with the body paragraphs.
RATINGS:
Topic Sentences ★★☆ Supporting Details ★★★★
Explanations ★★★★ Closings ★★★☆
Transitions ★★★☆ Incorporating Quotes ★★★★
Set Up Quotes ★★★☆ Use/ Proper Quote documentation ★★★★
Explain Relevance ★★★★ Concluding sentences ★★★★
Overall Rating ★★★★
GOAL FOR NEXT PIECE : I will focus on making my topic sentences more clear, because that is what my feedback shows that I need the most improvement on
Based on the feedback that I received for this writing piece, I did particularly well with analyzing my direct quotes. This was what I have been consistently told to improve in my past writing pieces not only this year, but throughout most of high school. The area that I need to improve on based on feedback, is the clarity of my topic sentences. The loop cycle did work for me because I was able to make a clear thesis statement and support it well with the body paragraphs.
RATINGS:
Topic Sentences ★★☆ Supporting Details ★★★★
Explanations ★★★★ Closings ★★★☆
Transitions ★★★☆ Incorporating Quotes ★★★★
Set Up Quotes ★★★☆ Use/ Proper Quote documentation ★★★★
Explain Relevance ★★★★ Concluding sentences ★★★★
Overall Rating ★★★★
GOAL FOR NEXT PIECE : I will focus on making my topic sentences more clear, because that is what my feedback shows that I need the most improvement on