PIECE OF WRITING : Oedipus The King Essay
In this piece of writing, based on feedback , I did particularly well with have a clear and concise thesis statement. However , not all of my topic sentences did a good job reflecting my thesis statement. Topic sentences and my analysis of quotes are the areas that need the most improvement for this piece of writing. I struggled with the use of a loop cycle for this essay. It did not work well because my topic sentences were not reflective of my thesis statement. Overall I could have put a lot more effort forth in this piece of writing and could have been more cautious of simple mistakes.
RATINGS:
Topic Sentences ★☆ ☆ ☆ Supporting Details ★★☆☆
Explanations ★★☆ ☆ Closings ★★☆☆
Transitions ★★★☆ Incorporating Quotes ★★★☆
Set Up Quotes ★★☆☆ Use/ Proper Quote documentation ★★★★
Explain Relevance ★☆☆☆ Concluding sentences ★★★☆
Overall Rating ★★☆☆
GOAL FOR NEXT PIECE : First of all , I will make sure that I understand the subject that I am writing about . I will also focus on making my topic sentences reflect my thesis statement more.
In this piece of writing, based on feedback , I did particularly well with have a clear and concise thesis statement. However , not all of my topic sentences did a good job reflecting my thesis statement. Topic sentences and my analysis of quotes are the areas that need the most improvement for this piece of writing. I struggled with the use of a loop cycle for this essay. It did not work well because my topic sentences were not reflective of my thesis statement. Overall I could have put a lot more effort forth in this piece of writing and could have been more cautious of simple mistakes.
RATINGS:
Topic Sentences ★☆ ☆ ☆ Supporting Details ★★☆☆
Explanations ★★☆ ☆ Closings ★★☆☆
Transitions ★★★☆ Incorporating Quotes ★★★☆
Set Up Quotes ★★☆☆ Use/ Proper Quote documentation ★★★★
Explain Relevance ★☆☆☆ Concluding sentences ★★★☆
Overall Rating ★★☆☆
GOAL FOR NEXT PIECE : First of all , I will make sure that I understand the subject that I am writing about . I will also focus on making my topic sentences reflect my thesis statement more.