PIECE OF WRITING : The Kite Runner Essay
In this piece of writing, based on feedback , I did particularly well with my use of supportive quotes and my thesis statement was clear. The area with the most room for improvement in the piece, is my analysis of my supportive quotes. The loop cycle worked very well for me in this piece, I was able to take my stance in the thesis, support it throughout my body paragraphs , and then tie it all back together in my conclusion.
RATINGS:
Topic Sentences ★★★★ Supporting Details ★★★☆
Explanations ★★☆☆ Closings ★★★☆
Transitions ★★★☆ Incorporating Quotes ★★★★
Set Up Quotes ★★★★ Use/ Proper Quote documentation ★★★★
Explain Relevance ★★☆☆ Concluding sentences ★★★★
Overall Rating ★★★★
GOAL FOR NEXT PIECE : I will make sure to analyze my quotes more in depth , I will also write stronger topic sentences. Overall I will be more watchful for grammatical errors and making sure my sentences flow more fluently.
In this piece of writing, based on feedback , I did particularly well with my use of supportive quotes and my thesis statement was clear. The area with the most room for improvement in the piece, is my analysis of my supportive quotes. The loop cycle worked very well for me in this piece, I was able to take my stance in the thesis, support it throughout my body paragraphs , and then tie it all back together in my conclusion.
RATINGS:
Topic Sentences ★★★★ Supporting Details ★★★☆
Explanations ★★☆☆ Closings ★★★☆
Transitions ★★★☆ Incorporating Quotes ★★★★
Set Up Quotes ★★★★ Use/ Proper Quote documentation ★★★★
Explain Relevance ★★☆☆ Concluding sentences ★★★★
Overall Rating ★★★★
GOAL FOR NEXT PIECE : I will make sure to analyze my quotes more in depth , I will also write stronger topic sentences. Overall I will be more watchful for grammatical errors and making sure my sentences flow more fluently.